Dear Diary,
       It’s morning. My parents are at work, and Snowflake, my fluffy puppy is barking at me, so I have to go out with him even though I don’t want to leave my cozy and warm bed. 
Today I want to see 2 movies that I heard are really interesting: “The darkest minds”, “Where hands touch”, .......and....[conjunctie] I hope I’ll be able to do that. Usually I can’t manage to do everything I want because I don’t know how to organize my time.
        Yesterday I read ...a... review about a book I booked, but ...it... seems to never arrive. The book was about the unknown world of glaciers. I need to send the publishing house a message about it.  About messages: my phone won’t stop ringing. My classmates keep sending me more or less interesting messages. O, wait someone’s calling me…..I’m back. It was my mother asking me if I want to join her and go shopping. Hell no!!! The last thing I want to do is going at a crowded place. If I need anything all I have to do is go online and Voilà. I find what I need in less than 15 minutes.  Anyway, as I said before, I want to see a movie, so I ...'ve.... turn on the TV, grab a bag of popcorn and press play.  Yeah, what can I say, it could be better, the movie I mean. It was really boring. It didn’t had has action at all.
         Oh it’s seems like my parents just came back home.
         Well see you next time.
         Love,
         Iyleene

ideile ar trebui legate mai coerent si ar trebui sa renunti la intreruperea povestirii cu digresiuni sau chestiuni irelevante; in plus, e prea scurta redactarea - mai adauga detalii; si povesteste la timpul trecut

Last edited by Iyleene Silvergaze (2019-01-29 10:41:42)