The Internet is a global wide area network that connects computer systems across the world. It is good to have internet access but at the same time it's not because it can damage health[nu argumenta in introducere, doar zi ca unii se opun].
          On one hand, a lot of morepeople go online everyday.[acest topic sentence nu arata clar ca esti impotriva internetului aici, precizeaza] There, they can find fake news, fake information that can influence them in a negative way. For example, nowadays children use the internet a lot, including when they do their homework and this is a bad thing because it can create addiction on toit. It can also lead to illiteracy , to misunderstanding of lessons and other things because the child finds everything solved without studying on the respective topic. Moreover, using the internet for a long period of time people don't read anymore and they can't develope develop ideas. This can lead to myopia, to neurological diseases.
        On the other hand, it is a good thing that people can communicate with each other but at the same time in life ........... thereare more important things than this. World peace, freedom, equality in rights, the right to education, the right to have a job are more important than internet access. Without them people couldn't live in a quite silent world.[tot argumentul asta e impotriva internetului, muta-l in paragraful anterior] Moreover, it is true that these days, .......... internet is very popular and the explanation of this is that people like to be popular, they like to do what others do and this thing happens because people doesn't want to have a real imagine image of their personality. They want to be like others are, they want to have what others have, they like to post on social media accounts because others post and in this way the internet became a popular thing.
       To sum up, internet is not a priority. People can live without this as others may have lived in the past. People should try to understand that are many more interesting, important things that they can do in their free time and also they should understand that reading a book it is not the same thing with reading a document on the internet. So, ....... theUnited Nations shouldn't declare access to the internet a basic human right.

Last edited by star444 (2019-12-14 18:37:53)