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A hole day at home

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Today itís the first day of the weekend. Outside ....... is very cold and Iím getting bored, so I decided to read one of my new books. The story is about a tomcat which switch.... bodys with the doughter of his and his ownerís housekeeper. Now Winston, the tomcat, is helping Kira, the girl, to solve her  motherís problem with a drug dealer.
          Then out of nowhere a really big light came out of the book and the second think I know it was that I found myself next to Kira and Winston. After I told them who I was they agree... to let me be a part of their team. The team had two more people, a boy, Tom, and a girl, Pauli. Toughether , ...... made up a plan to fool the drug dealer and puted it in..... the action. We were planning to met with him by buying some of his drugs and expoze him to the policemen.
          Our plan worked and he ended up in the prison. Of course all the adults scold.... us because we putted ourselves in danger but after all that they were happy we were all right and thanked us for the help.
          After that we geved a very big and funny party, we all danced , played and laughed. As soon as the party finish.... and night came, I heard my motherís voice calling me. Suddenly I woke up and realized that I was dreaming.

Last edited by teacherovi (2018-10-15 11:37:00)

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Hi! So I just finished reading this and I realised that I didn't really get a thing that you said. There are many many mistakes which are preventing me from understanding your composition. The story that you was trying to tell was interesting but you should try and improve your grammar a little bit.

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