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A Diary Page: Amazing day at the fantastic Fun Fair

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This summer, my parents surprised me with some tickets to The Greatest Fun Fair in Europe. The tickets were for me and my best friends.
At 9 o'clock, we left the country; Paris was waiting for us.
We arrived in the city, after three hours, then we went straight to the hotel.
After lunch, at about 3 p.m. we went to the park.
When we arrived, we showed the tickets, and we entered the Fun Fair.
We were surprised to see an amazing roller coaster, countless Fun Fair Games and the crowed of people there.
We entered the mirror hall first, then we got scared when travelled in the ghost train.
After eating the delicious Candy Floss, we went to the main attraction of the park: The Roller Coaster.
The ride was really fantastic; even though some of my friends were terrified.
At the end of the day, we were all disappointed because our experience was over.

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Simple,nice and concrete. I like your idea of a " unical experience" which "is over". Nice!

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