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A former teacher

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The country of   Estein. Built upon the leadership, strong minds and hard work of its past, this country is now among the most self-reliant countries in its corner of the world. Their literacy, housing and public health are among its current greatest strengths. Unfortunately they lack a little in public safety and natural resources.
Estein is a democratic country. There are a few small opposing groups against the current leadership and there hasn't been ....peace..... for a long time. However, the current greatest threat to the nation is a new disease, but the current leadership can't do anything more to solve this issue.
The people of Estein are jolly. They live brilliant lives and while public safety might be lacking, their literacy helps relief releasemost of their issues. Religion holds a fair deal of importance in their lives and, if anything, has made them more confident. The people of Estein aren't really spiritual however althoughthey do have an abundance of celebrations and many special ceremonies. Here you can find a quiet little town named   Eaglestar. Thatís my hometown. [nu e ok sa faci o introducere atat de lunga, cu atatea detalii diverse si apoi sa treci la un subiect complet diferit]
My name is Iyleene Silvergaze and today Iím going to tell you about one of my former teachers. My foreign calligraphy teacher actually. His name is Alas Moonfall. Brown, wavy hair awkwardly hangs over a craggy, menacing face. Smart amber eyes, set elegantly within their sockets. He's polite, driven, witty and perhaps a little too lonely. But there's more than meets the eye, not surprising for somebody with his position. He was born in a wealthy family in an important capital. He lived out of trouble until he was about 10 years old, but at that point things changed. He improved upon existing powers and was among the most popular people. With a great deal of determination, he fulfilled dreams in a fantastic world. But with his wits and persistence, there's nothing to stop him from fulfilling all dreams. He could quickly become a force to be reckoned with.
                 A truly interesting person. Thatís all for today. Until next time. Bye. :)

Last edited by Iyleene Silvergaze (2019-05-30 08:33:05)

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Even if I think that your former teacher doesn't really  exist you did a very good  work. I mean your story has caught my attention from the beginning. You describe him in a very beautiful way and it is a creative and original composition.

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Like my friend, a agree, the story caught my attention with all those details. The country seems to be nice, but a thing the introduction was too long, it could help if you went on the next paragraph. To tell you the truth, I thought that you were going to describe the place, not your teacher. All that aside, the description was very good

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good composition! You used many specific details and that caught the reader's attentions, included mine. I think you have a very good talent for making SF stories and I advise you to continue with that, good luck!

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